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Into The Wild- Jodie Hanlon Room 11

2009-02-10T06:44:00.000-08:00

Crusoe came eagerly to the side without waiting to be called. He could smell the fish that Kirstie was carrying on a plate.
Crusoe was looking at the fish in starvation and just dying to eat it. He was looking at the fish and nothing else . He never took his eyes off of the fish! Kirstie was looking at Crusoe and she saw the hunger in his eyes, because he was told to find food for himself and he had not eaten in 24 hours (one whole day!)
Kirstie had not had seen the ice behind her and she went slid! Sending the fish went flying and as Kirstie went down and Crusoe gulped down all of the fish. Kirstie was very hurt but she picked herself up and rubbed off all of the dirt off of her clothes.
Everybody was shouting “Are you Okay my dear?”
She cried up “I’m fine!” in a very hurtful voice.
Crusoe looked at Kirstie as if to say “Ha Ha!”
Dad had an idea, he said “Wait a minute, the roads are slidy so......”
“We can slide him down!” continued granddad.
By Jodie Hanlon 2/2/09

Into The wild - Oran P6

2009-02-10T05:55:00.001-08:00

Into The Wild...

Crusoe came eagerly to the side without waiting to be called. He could smell the fish that Kirstie was carrying on a plate.
Kirstie held the fish in front of his face. Crusoe tried to get it, but slipped on the icy rim. Dad got everyone set to help Crusoe. Crusoe tried again except, Dad and Grumble grabbed his flippers.
“Heave!” shouted Dad.
They managed to get him out the pond but he’s not the best on land. He slipped and slid on to the tarmac. Kirstie however slipped and Crusoe gobbled up all the fish.
“How will we get him to the loch now?” she asked.
“We’ll slid him!” said dad
So Grumble slid him down into the loch and away he went...

By Oran

Into The Wild- Meaghan rm11

2009-02-10T05:31:00.002-08:00

Into The Wild...

Crusoe came eagerly to the side without waiting to be called. He could smell the fish Kirstie was carrying on a plate.
Before he got hungrier Crusoe was desperate to get some food. He struggled to get out... 2 minutes later Crusoe finally got out the pond and followed Kirstie. All of a sudden, “ Ow!” screamed Kirstie.
“What Happened?” asked Angus.
“I slipped, but I’m ok,” replied Kirstie.
“Good,” said Dad in relief.
“Hurry up it’s getting cold,” said Grumble shriving. Dad had an idea,
” Why don’t we slide Crusoe along the ice?” suggested Dad.
“Good idea Dad,” replied Angus.... 12 minutes later they arrived at the loch.
“We’re here, finally,” Angus panted.
“Are you sure he’ll be alright?” asked Kirstie.
“Of course he will,” replied Dad.
“Bye Crusoe,” they all said one by one. Crusoe made a strange noise, they all knew what he meant. Crusoe left without another noise and dived into the water.

Into The Wild- Rachel Room 11

2009-02-10T05:31:00.001-08:00

Into the wild
Crusoe came eagerly to the side without waiting to be called. He could smell the fish that Kristie was carrying on a plate. Crusoe struggled out of the pond but didn’t succeed. He was desperate to get some delicious food.
“Come on everyone, let’s help him” bellowed Dad
“Kirstie bribe him with the fish and Angus you help her.
Grumble grab one flipper and will grab the other.
1, 2, 3, GO!
“Heave” chanted Grumble and Dad
“Come on put your backs into it” screamed Angus
Finally they got Crusoe out. The ground was shivering and sparkling with ice. As Kirstie bribed Crusoe over the pebbles Crusoe followed extremely slow. Suddenly Kirstie slipped across the ice. “Kirstie!” cried Mum.
“Are you ok “put in Dad
“I am fine” replied Kirstie.
Crusoe gobbled up the fish.
“What will we do Know” asked Kirstie with a puzzled look on her face
“I know said dad why don’t we slide him down to the lochan”
“Great!” shouted Angus
1, 2, 3, PUSH!”Screamed dad
Kirstie and Angus got on his back while Dad pushed Crusoe down the road. Eventually they got to the lochan. Crusoe made a loud excited sound and raced into the lochan. He turned back to look at everyone and then disappeared out of sight.

Into The Wild - Poonam Room 11

2009-02-10T05:31:00.000-08:00

Into the wild...

Crusoe came eagerly to the side without waiting to be called. He could smell the fish that Kirstie was carrying on a plate.

After that, Kirstie, Angus, Grumble, Mum and Dad tried to heave Crusoe out of the pond but it wasn’t so easy. They tried to heave Crusoe into the wheelbarrow, however Crusoe was too big and fat. Eventually they get him out. Grumble says “pulling him to the loch is well impossible besides Crusoe is so heavy.” They tempt Crusoe by showing him fish. Afterwards poor Kirstie falls because she bumps into huge Crusoe.

Then Dad gets an idea of sliding Crusoe down the hills and paths. Finally everyone gets Crusoe to the loch and slides him in. “PHEW!!!!!!” says everyone.
“Can we have lunch now said,” Angus.
“Sure said Mum.

By Poonam Jhakra

The Headless Horseman by Logan S

2008-04-22T02:17:00.000-07:00

In the very heart of Finland Forest, under the starlit sky where Finnish children used to play and the adults used to be working hard Alex and his Dad called Nagol have their colourful tents and their peaceful burning fire, singing campfire songs to the sound of Nagol’s guitar.

But there is a legend that Alex and Nagol are not aware of. Deeper into the forest is a house made from a giant pumpkin, with burning candles in the window and lots of bare, crooked trees swooping around it. There are always three on the roof squawking out the dark, jet-black sky. Here lives The Headless Horseman!

Stories tell us that he has a black leather cloak, with a green inside and a pumpkin for a head. He goes around with his shiny, blood covered, sharp axe chopping peoples heads of for lunch. Apparently he rides a black horse faster than the fastest cars. Alex and Nagol don’t know what to expect.

The Monster by Laura

2008-04-22T02:15:00.000-07:00

Long ago before dinosaurs were alive there was a lovely quiet continent called Africa.
All though Africa is a very nice and peaceful continent it was once struck by poverty.
Even through Africa didn’t have much people, shops or towns the people there were very light hearted. The children there were generally lively and mostly always out.
Quickly thunder came over the land suddenly a massive creature came. Everyone screamed worryingly. Terrifyingly he picked up a few children. In his mouth they went as everyone could hear them screaming and desperately wanting to get out.

Magasaur by Emma M

2008-04-22T02:13:00.000-07:00

Long Long ago at the seaside carnival in the city of Unismick. Under the little rides it had the biggest ride in the world and it gets better it used to be a Magasuar (it’s a half flying and half water animal) in the year 1311.

It as so much fun watching and listening to the kids running, laughing, screaming and playing on the rides. Most families were very pleasant and joyful. This one little boy on the ride ten times and got so sick he had to go back home. The ride has five loop the loops and when it finishes it finishes with BANG!!!!! (Probably because it’s so old) So many people crammed into the small carnival park from all over the country to celebrate the 696th anniversary.

Then that day the sky turned back and all that you could hear was ball the people screaming of the crowd, running for their lives “THE RIDE HAS COME ALIVE AHHHHH!!!!! yelled the crowd. A car pulled up and someone jumped out. Everyone stopped and looked “who’s that?” the crowd discussed between themselves.

The Castle of Hitler

2008-04-22T02:07:00.000-07:00

WALT write the opening for a legend

On a stormy beach of Germany, stands a small and proud castle. The castle was used in World War II when the Nazi party fought in the War. The castle is based in a clean and happy village.

The Men and Woman in the village are friendly and peaceful. Some of the people believe that the heart of Hitler is in the castle. But no one goes near it so that’s why they live happy.

But one dark stormy night the sky turned green and the village went blue. A grey suspicious dragon came running out of the castle. The Men and Woman ran out of the village screaming and crying, as they heard the dragon shouting "I love eating children." The whole village turned back and laughed we don’t have any children. The dragon said wrong address as he ran away and the village people went back into the houses.

By Max

Sapphire and the Snake by Hannah

2008-04-22T02:06:00.000-07:00

A long time ago, on an island just off the coast of Spain there was an old castle that over looked the village of Monia.
In that castle lived a beautiful princess called Sapphire. She had long, straight brown hair and she looked after the village very well. The villagers were very pleasant and everyone loved Sapphire.
But one day the sky turned black and a giant snake slithered into Monia and wrapped itself around the castle and trapped Sapphire inside. The villagers were petrified and the gossip spread all over Spain, Italy and France.
Now the King of Spain was Sapphire’s father and he was outraged when he found out about this so he set a challenge he said, ‘who ever can free Sapphire and kill this horrible beast can have her hand in marriage.’
The prince of France heard about this challenge and he set off to Monia and he tried to kill the snake but he did not succeed . So the prince of Canada tried to save poor Sapphire but he too did not succeed. At last the prince of Italy tried and he was full of courage and bravery and he cut the beast in half and saved Sapphire and like the King said he got her hand in marriage. They had a lovely wedding and had three kids called Mona, Minnie and Mandy.

The River Monster by Sarah

2008-04-22T02:04:00.001-07:00

Long, long ago on the hills of Glencoe, before the houses were built a legend was created.
The hills stood tall and proud so high their tips were in the clouds. On one side of the hills there were fields and fields of luscious green grass but this story’s not set there, its set in the village on the other side of the hill, called Ballahullish.
The village was a small village with only a farm, one or two shops and a few scattered houses.
The people in Ballahullish weren’t poor nor rich and were all good friends. The village was a happy village until the River Monster came.
There was a river that wove in and out between the houses in Ballahullish and that’s where the monster lived. It went around gobbling up the people in the village but they were still alive in the monster’s tummy. When you were lying in your bed you could hear the eaten people’s cries for help echoing around the village.

The One Eye Giant By Bili x

2008-04-22T02:02:00.000-07:00

4/4/08

Long, Long ago in a scary Jungle with lime green trees and a hill so bright as lights. It was cold Winter day snow was tallest mountain the in the Jungle.
A group of kids were out camping everyone was happy and cheery. A little girl called Poppy and her best friend Jenna were having tea together. Everything was going great all of the friends were having dinner together.
Suddenly a dark cloud arrived, happiness fled from the Jungle. Poppy and Jenna went to see what was happening. A very large giant appeared but it wasn’t any old giant it only had one eye!! The one eye giant kidnapped them, he took Poppy and Jenna to a little shed far far away from the camping area. The one eye giant tapped them!....
The one eye giant was going to EAT THEM, Poppy and Jenna screamed HELP but nobody could heard them.....

The Creature by Maliha

2008-04-22T01:58:00.000-07:00

Long ago, there was an ancient village bang in the heart of Africa that we know almost nothing about.

People lived in that village, happy to their hearts content. They had children to play with food to eat and houses to live in.

But one day, a danger could be sensed in the air that made the people tremble with fear and darkness spread over the land frightening all the children!!

Day of Peril By Mark

2008-04-22T01:56:00.001-07:00

4/4/08 Day of Peril by Mark

In an old town in the countryside there was a forest and that forest was known as the forest of silver light.
The people in the town went about their work, the children playing and singing as the sun shone in the sky.
Until!!BANG!! A huge explosion. Everybody ran to see where it had come from. Then they all gazed upon a humongous rock on top of the forest .Everyone shouted “No the forest has been destroyed”. Then the rock began to split. It was just then that they realized that it was an egg. Then a humongous fire breathing dragon burst out. Everyone ran indoors. The dragon destroyed all their crops and all their animals they were all sure to be doomed!!

The Great Sea-Witch!!! By Heather

2008-04-22T01:54:00.000-07:00

Long long ago there was a city and in that city there was a town and in that town there was a village, and it all took place in a sea-side called Drakmourth.

Drakmourth was the happiest place in the world. It had children playing and the sea swaying in the breeze. There had never been a rainy day in Drakmourth. To get water the people had to go to the gushing gusar of Goby, which had the freshest water through the whole land!

One day Jully was going up to get water she found Sue and Taz there to. (They were also getting water). Suddenly they burst into a sea of tears. “What is ever the matter?’’Jully asked “We were .... Walking down the beach with Josef ... “Sue said quietly.” And” Said Jully.”Well ... we saw this thing ... in the sand ... and we sort of pulled it ...” Sue said and before she could say anymore Taz butted in and he screamed (still crying) “A hole opened up and Josef fell in it.” Suddenly there was a big CRASH! Then a puff of smoke and the ground shook and then there stood right in front of them the ugliest sea-witch they had ever seen !?! They all screamed!!! Terrified they slowly backed off!!!

Disaster at the Beach! By Jennifer Ritchie

2008-04-22T01:50:00.000-07:00

4/4/08 WALT: write the opening for a legend.

Once apon a time, long, long ago, beside a village, there was a seaside. That seaside has been closed for a long time ever since ...

There once lived a family, a mum, dad, two twin boys and a little girl. All their life they had been full of laughter and happiness, until one day the laughter and happiness fled from the beach.

One day the little girl, Aleigsha was making a sand castle and the boys, Jim and James were splashing each other in the water, their mum and dad were sunbathing in the hot sun. Everyone was having fun. Some teenagers were playin volleyball, other kids were burrying each other in the sand.

Then suddenly a big seamonster came out making everyone terrified,"HELP, a big scary, weird looking monster!" screamed James. Everyone was running for their lifes.

The monster was hurting everyone, he was spitting water at everyone. He even through a little boy in the sea. He was smacking down rocks, srangling people with his wiggly arms. Everyone was terrified. Jim screames "WHAT IF HE KILLS US!"

Then suddenly someone came flying over the hills "don't worry I will save you,"A man called 'Jay-man' said. Jay-man tried shooting the monster, using bows and arrows but the monster just wouldn't die.Jay-man tried everything but it just wouldn't work. But then he thought f something. "I have an idea!"Jay-man had thought of a brilliant idea. He discovered a big cage and he then placed it on the sand and put a big, juicy steak right in the middle of the cage. When the seamonster came to eat the steak the cage trapped him inside. the big seamonster got pushed down a big, massive mountain! Jay-manwas praised forever and everyone loved him .He stayed near the beach and saw everyone everyday. He had a happy life from then on.

Moving Water by Melissa

2008-04-22T01:48:00.000-07:00

On the seaside of Newqauy there is a little town. In that town there are shops and houses. Long, long ago, there was no town but only a beach. There were some towns near that one beach. All the people who lived in they towns could never be happier. They were the happiest people in the world.

One day a little girl and her parents went to the beach.

The little girl Sophie could see something in the water. It looked like stones but it wasn’t. Sophie screamed as loud as she could. “Sophie what’s wrong?” said her Dad. Sophie just pointed in the water. They realised it was a sea creature. The sea creature opened its mouth trying to grab Sophie by her dress.

Write The Opening For A Legend - By Ellie :-)

2008-04-22T01:44:00.000-07:00

4/4/08 Models For Writing
WALT – write the opening for a legend

Eille-Tlek

A long time ago in a peaceful and small village, where everyone knew each other, it was just a normal and enjoyable day in the village. The village was on a hill top, so to get to the local supermarket, you had to walk down the hill (it was to steep for cars and bikes), then you had to get a boat and sail for about half an hour.

There were two girls called Rennie and Jessica, and they were aged 9 and 10. They were the best of friends and most of the time their mums and dads said they were closer than sisters!

One day the two girls decided to go to the local newsagents which is just across the road from the super market and they both knew the route backwards, forwards and probably even side-ways!!! They had an idea to go to the newsagents to get a magazine, juice and crisps and sweets, so off they went, down the long, long and very steep hill (by the time they actually got there, their legs were really tired!!!) Then it was time to go on the boat ... but it was too choppy to sail but none of them noticed this. They went onwards with their “adventure”. There was something on the water when Rennie and Jessica dipped their feet in to cool off. A big long type of devil / mermaid / dog / fish (a bit of everything really!) Then it came out from the water...

It rose up like the spirits rising from the dead. The girls were screaming wildly as the boat was rocking from side to side like you would do with a baby but in fast-forward ! As the sea monster rose, the girls were screaming and crying, "SILENCEEEEEEEEE!" roared the thing... as it rose from the deep blue sea. There was the sound of the monster shouting, the girls crying, the waves crashing and the thunder.

There was a flicker of hope as the girls, Rennie and Jessica saw another boat rowing towards them, but then the hope died. It had gone in the opposite direction. They were screaming but it was no use. They were gone.

But no ! They were behind the monster thing and they were about to throw their fishing net over it ! The man had a finger to his lips.... he was telling them to be quiet and stop screaming. They threw the net over the monster, it was trying to fight back but it was too tangled up in the net.

"YESSSSSSSSS!!!" screamed Rennie and Jessica as they hugged each other. The men anchored their boat down next to Rennie and Jessica's. The girls couldn't thank them enough. The men (they were called Shaun and David) and they were made princes. After all that fuss, the lived through their fear of going back into the sea. After that, they got on with life and told the tale to their families.

By Ellie P6 :-)

The Crocodile Rock By Caitlin

2008-04-22T01:41:00.000-07:00

The Crocodile Rock
Years Ago Millport, it was just a normal day. People going past on bikes, people having ice-cream. Just an ordinary day.

Kirsty aged five was down in Millport for a day with her two younger sisters Becky and Rachael. Kirsty was bored out of her skull unlike her sisters she was not having fun. So she decided to go for a wander down to the crocodile rock! As her mum and sisters went bonkers, she was sitting quite the thing on the crocodile rock!

Then suddenly the tide came in, she was stranded. All of a sudden she felt herself rise. It was the crocodile rock, it had come alive!

Rachael and Becky could see Kirsty. So they went to get their mum. Jackie came, jumped over the railing onto the crocodile rock. The sisters where happier now but only for a little while because the crocodile rock started moving back and back until it was out of sight! Then the rock had a huge yawn, Kirsty was terrified. Then the rock started sinking.....

All the crowed were gob-smacked! Becky and Rachael were screaming with fear and terror whilst everyone else was running about looking for help.
The Garrison doors flew open and John came out. Even though he only owned the Garrison he had muscles like a wrestler! He said " Have no fear, I will help. Go into your houses and dont come out until I walk past your home!"
The next day when the tide was out, John could see the rock, lying in the harbour as well as Jackie and Kirsty! (Becky and Rachael stayed with John the night Jackie and Kirsty went missing.) John then reunided Jackie and Kirsty with their family. Then John through the biggest rock he could see at the crocodile and it froze, back to the normal rock! Eveyone was ever so happy now!
Despite everything that had happened that week, when they left they had a smile on their face and Millport was back to the quite little island!

Ding Walla

2008-03-05T03:40:00.000-08:00

There once lived a strange creature in the packed full jungle of Africa...There only two of them in the world and they are a Crabalion.Its half a lion and half a crab. It can climb to as high as Mount Everest.He mostly goes up there ,because its the highest mountain in the world.When he's up there he barely comes back down.He has a brother called Walla Ding he dose the exact same as his brother , but they only have flying and climbing in common.They hunt down preditors that are bullys they are hunters who ankle bite them and then go down onto the floor and crawl our of the jungle.Then they eat fish that they have caught and thats how the Crabalion lives.

Princess Ashley by Heather Mcfadyen

2008-03-05T03:38:00.001-08:00

"Hi im Ashley."" I was little I was born with a birds left ear so I can fly because of it and I always cover it up"."I am 15 years old(i no im still very very young) but I live with my Boyfriend prince Kyle and two adorable Kids Amanda (aged 2 ) and Liam (aged 5).""I live in a castle and I am super rich!!!""I also have the best job in the world im a model I model all over the world.""My hair coulor is blond and I am 5 feet I think well thats what height I was the last time I checked my eye colour is blue and i have butiful tanned skin and a very skinny body(because im on a diet)!!""I love to sing my favourite singer is Amy Mcdonald when she sings I have to sing along!""But my ultimet thing to do is shop I love to shop I would shop day and night eny day of the week eny week any year!!!""I go to cheerleading and dancing it is so much fun!""Thats some about me il be writing in my diary tommorow bye for now ciao!!!

By Heather Mcfadyen

Furry Longstocking by Bili

2008-03-05T03:38:00.000-08:00

Hi my name is Furry Longstocking, Im 13 years old. I live in the scary woods with a long path to nowhere. I live with my caring Mun and funny Dad.

Furry has some secret powers, She can cast spells (OoOoOoO) and she can fly high up in the sky. Well Furry is only 4 feet ( very small). She was born on 13th April.

She loves playing with all her friends, Zalalading, Holly, Muff Muff, Bill Bill, Amy, Bili and Ellie. Furry goes to school but not just any it is animal school. She goes to school with friendly dogs, funny rabbits, scary tigers, caring cat's and lots more.

By Bili

All About Candice By Rachael

2008-03-05T03:35:00.000-08:00

Candice Mc Kenzie is a gorgeous fourteen year old. She loves to go shopping

with her dog Candy. Her dog is a cute loveble Laso Apso. They both love

going to town and their favourite shop is New Look. Candice lives with
her Mum, Dad and her three big sisters called Nicole, Nicola and Nicky.
Her big sisters are very mean to her, except the youngest - She is only
fifteen and the two oldest are Nicle and Nicola, they are twins. Her
cousine is a cat called Fluffy and all of her faimaly live at the zoo.

She has a really big secret. Whenever she gets upset, she goes to her
boyfriends house, who is twenty three!
Her Mum doesn't allow her because he is to old and he gives her loads
of money to spend on shopping and she is addicted, so she has to sneak out.

By Emma M

2008-03-05T03:05:00.002-08:00

Only three creatures left of out there of the Wingdill family. No one has ever saw Batwing, Flapper and Arkbat.
He has horns and hair on his head. There is nothing different about his head than mine. He has sharp arms and bat wing and (that is how he got his name). Surprisingly, he wears normal clothes, his legs are as furry as a polar bear, he has big feet.

He works at his dad's restaurant underground because he makes the family recipes. he adds all the ingredients, then blow fire on it. The restaurant is a bit like a cave. He lives in a plane-boat above Scotland (It can fly or go in water).

Bellena by Sarah

2008-03-05T03:05:00.001-08:00

Hi, I'm Bellena. I'm a Pea-pol-zeb-guin-monarch butterfly or a Pezegamoby for short. I have a human face with short, blond hair tied up in bunches. My eyes are oak brown and my lips are bluey green. I have peacock feathers sprouting from my head in lots of shades of blue. My ears are white and fluffy and I have wings that are black and red. I have a human torso with stripy zebra arms. The bottom half of my body is like a penguin. Its soft black and white fur with little orange feet. I live in a little house, in a little street under ground of the local park with my family. I have a Mum, Dad, baby brother and my pet cockroach called Rouchy. He is my best friend in the whole world.

Emily By Hannah

2008-03-05T03:05:00.000-08:00

I'm Emily and I'm nearly normal but I can fly.
My whole family flies but my sister and I can fly highest because we both have brown bunches that spin around really fast and that gives us a boost.

I love swimming and making friends my best friends are Sensible, Batwing and Bellina.They can all fly too so we have races(I'm usually first).

Eating chocolate is my worst habbit, I go mad with Crunchies.

I live in the country and I have an enormous house so we can all practise flying.

I'm four years old and I have brown eyes and brown hair.I'm a fussy eater so I'm skinny.I fly so high I have a brilliant tan.

So apart from the flying part I'm just normal,

Bye.

Sensible by Bethany

2008-03-05T03:04:00.006-08:00

This is Sensible. Sensible is a kind girl. She has an incredible power, the power to become invisible. The way Sensible became invisibile was when an invisible spider bit her. Her age is 4 and she lives with her family, of her Mum, Dad and brother called sibby. Their home is in the sky. Sensible appearance is long blonde straight hair.Her height is 2 metres she has lovely shiny green eyes and a body shape is a small, thin girl. She goes to a wongerful school and enjoys meeting her friends Emily and Batwing. Three interesting things about her, is she is very kind. She finds it hard to make friends and she never fights with her brother.

Arachno Kid Arises by Ben

2008-03-05T03:04:00.004-08:00

Arachno Kid is a 1109 year old kid who is a janitor in a school in Texas.He lives with his mum Arachno woman,his dad Arachno man,his sister Arachnita Kid and his companion (Best Friend) Inga Oonga.He lives in a little cave by the sea in North Texas and Him and his companion are always trying to take over the world but they never succeed.He got taunted and teased in school because he had red beady eyes,a lion main,he is ten foot two and has scary fangs.He can fly and his hobbies are eating insects and people but worst of all his worst habit is pickinghis nose, he loves it so much he even bought the super sonic nose picker 2000(see loves it alot).Well anyway there quite scary so stay away.Oh by the way there enemies are Rab penguin and Mutant Man and there scary too so surely this is the end of the earth.Wait and find out!!

My Made-Up Character By Ellie

2008-03-05T03:04:00.003-08:00

About Zalalading

"Hey, my name's Zalalading, I know, it's a weird name! I am exactly 12 years, 3 months and 11 days. I live with the ugly toad that captured me. (we'll be on that chapter soon.)" explained Zalalading, "I haven't seen my family in about 2 years. *SNIFFLE*. Sorry, I always get a bit bubbly when I talk about them. (I had 2 sisters and 3 brothers, a mum and dad) I wonder if they miss me ? I miss them dearly. I bet the toad will want his water ." explained Zalalading quietly. The toad did not like her talking about ... her family.

"ZALALADINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!" screamed the frog, "I NEED YOU NOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!" roared the Toad. He was so mean, and impatient.

The toad captured Zalalading when she was about 10. She was in her garden and her mum had nipped out to the shops to get bread and milk. Then there was a knock at the door ... Zalalading's friend was coming over then, so she thought it would be her, but it was a very ugly toad, he said, "come with me, you will be my servant!"

When Zalalading's mum came home, Zalalading had gone ...

By Ellie

Serafina Dicena By Emma Howat

2008-03-05T03:04:00.002-08:00

"Hello I'm Serafina Dicena. I have pale blue blood and I live with my crabs Clusty And Misty. I have blonde swirling hair. I' m quite small for my age and I can fly. (I can't tell you my age because I can't remember), I also have a peacocks tail."

"198,765,453,210 years ago I flew here (the end of the world) I knew that because I have a year counter, because all the children my age teased me. Sometimes when I lost my temper, I would strangle them( with my octopus arms" )

"If I have the time I would fly to crab heaven to find out about my parents. The first news I got was that they had flew to the start of the world ( before dinosaurs because the dinosaurs would eat them) They live under the dust so as I can't see them!( cruel aren't they ,they wouldn't even let me visit them) SOB! It makes me cry!"

"Oh! Another thing if you ever want to visit me, and bring a present, you could buy some

roasted tongues(my crabs love those).

Brooke By Caitlin

2008-03-05T03:03:00.001-08:00

Period three, french class was so boring until a 5ft 4, brown haired girl came through the doors. A gorgeous body with an amaing tan. She walked up to the back row where the empty seat was and sat down. All the boys and girls could tell that she would be popular because she was chewing gum in the most strickest teachers class! Though of course she didnt know that because it was her first day. Ring,Ring the class was finished and time for gym, Brooke's all time favourite subject. After gym was finished and Brooke was out of the changing rooms, she was walking down the hall with her new best friend Rhian. A boy named Scott walked up to her and Rhian and asked out Brooke! Scott was the most popular boy in Bishopbriggs Academy! She was far too embarassed to answer, so Rhian answered for her and it was a yes! Did I mention why Brooke moved school? She moved because she was getting bullied! She is not the girl they all think she is.

VCOP letter by ross glass

2008-02-06T03:39:00.000-08:00

Dear,Jodias,

I am delighted to see that you want me back in the team and i will look at the website.

Despite the fact i got excluded from the acadamay i will not break any of the rules now.When do you want me back in the marvellous acadamey? i cant wait to get back i'll start packing.Have they got rid of that extreamly old wisard? (if not that is fine) but i hope they have he was so uptight and nervious always wanting to do it his self.Hope to see you soon.

P.S,I won't use any of the weather tampering spells,AGAIN!!

you 're Sinserly
Bathasar

VCOP By Lewis room 12

2008-01-16T03:50:00.000-08:00

Dear Jodias,

I too have been looking forward to coming back to the academy. And please tell the principal i am sorry for eating all the pies and yes i am coming to your party on the 24th of january after your graduation! i am desperately excited about it !

whilst we are at the party( as you have predicted) i will bring a present for you & your family !

I have perfected the cake and it remains in my mums house so that i wont eat it because it's so tasty. I right now have been having technical- difficulties and i've had 30 power-cuts this week! well i've got to go now so bye!
you're trusted friend,
Balthasar

VCOP - A story continued

2008-01-09T03:55:00.000-08:00

"Freeze!" roared digma as we started to stir. Sieze them murmered digma carlessly and 2 or 3 rocks reached out and held magnus,katie and john. Patch however dropped down a huge trap door they could hear him whining fainter,fainter,fainter until thud!!!

Patch,thought magnus was dead . "oh he's not dead" said digma as though reading magnus' mind. "just dazed." i'll let him out as soon as i'm fin.........arrrgh!!!" yelled digma " the navy!" cried john triumphantly.

Dear Jodias by Mark

2008-01-09T03:52:00.001-08:00

Dear Jodias,

I am delighted to be coming back to the W.A.W (Western Academy of Wizardry) to win this year's trophy.

In the time that I have been away I have learned from my ways and have improved on my behavior,in hoping that i shall not be excluded again.Thank you for the warnings I shall now know what to do and what not to do.My regards to all of the trainee wizards for what I have done in the past but when I come back you will see a new me.

Your good friend,
Balthasar

VCOP BY KERRY

2008-01-09T03:52:00.000-08:00

23 Magic road,

28 november 2006

Dear Jodias,

That is brillant !!!I can't wait to come because it has been so boring and dull there has been nothing to do !!!!

However, What team do we have to beat to win this trophy? I actully have got better at some spells and i am not as bad any more. I promise I will not get exculed again.I will not do any of these weather spell. I will not the ignore the wise warning and will be very careful website.
I just can't wait!!!

I will see you on Monday at 9.00 am we could go out and play on wizard place.
I might of got you something. (it might be a joke )

You favourite friend,
Balthasar

Letter to Jodias By Sarah

2008-01-09T03:48:00.001-08:00

44 Wand Avenue
30th November
2006

Dear Jodias,

I'm ecstatic too. I just can't wait to see all my old friends again and the Academy(I suppose.)

Thanks for the information its realy uesful, I'm dying to go on the website andI just want to tell you I realy have changed. I will never do anything bad again (I hope.) I'm just so happy I can't wait to see you. My mum even got me a new cloak, its raven black with little stars on it and they glisten in the sun.

See you on Sunday by the Old Man's Stable and I don't know if I mentioned this but I might have got you a present.

Your changed friend,
Balthasar

A letter to Jodias By Hannah

2008-01-09T03:48:00.000-08:00

Spellhill Village

28th November 2006

Dear Jodias,

What a spectaculer letter.

I cant wait to be with all my old friends again we are going to have so much fun.

I will try so hard to make up for everything I missed.

Please spare your magnificant magic for the show.

I shall be so carefull traviling to you because I dont want to be eaten by the monsters.

I am so sorry for tampering with the weather and breaking your wand I shall buy you a new one with my money.

I too am over the moon to be working withyou again.

Your friend,

Balthasar.

VCOP Story By Alex

2008-01-09T03:47:00.003-08:00

suddenly a terrifiying roar shook the room, and Digma nearly snatched Patch luckily Patch pounced away.

Despite having a great pounce Patch landed on his ankle"ow!" Patch cried they all ran over to see what happened.

Digma caught a glinpse of the gang round Patch. He put his gewy,smelly,slimy arm out and grabbed Magnus. "help!" cried Magnus.

Luckily Magnus escaped and ran away to the gang,then one of the caves fell in on Digma and they off the rocky place and back to their house.

Is Digma still alive or will he come back to haunt them...

VCOP To Jodias By Caitlin

2008-01-09T03:47:00.002-08:00

6 Wizard Of Waverly Place
27th November 2006

Dear Jodias

I was so thrilled when I opened you letter this morning! I'm so ecstatic to come back. I definitely will not do that spell again!

Having decided not to do the spell, I will only be participating in the flying competition! I will try my hardest to help The Western Academy of Wizards win first place (in The Competition for the Golden Coldren.) Lets move on. How are you and the other wizards been? Because they are my friends as well as you.

It just remains for me to say only in three days I will be back to enjoy the life as a wizard again!

You Wizard Warrior
Balthasar

Letter to Jodias by Andrew

2008-01-09T03:46:00.001-08:00

dratondor village

27th November 2006

Yes i am ecstatic about coming back aswell. I have been on the website and I have read all the information and when I come back we will win the trophy!

I have also been learning a spell called disicomentun ( It turns anything in to ash and thin back.) I heard that Zammok , Saradomin and Guthix teams are in the compotion. Anyway you need to send me the traningwork. I will comple it as soon as you give it to me.

It just leaves me with see you soon and hopefully I will see you soon. oh and i will never use te weather spells again.

your trusted friend Balthasar

p.s your letter smells very fragrent.

Letter from Balthasar by Emma H

2008-01-09T03:46:00.000-08:00

Windy Cottage

Owl Forrest

Dear Jodias,

Thank you so much for your letter. Same as you I am ecstatic to be coming back to the academy.

Have you found Lava yet after I opened his cooper cage and he flew triumphantly out the window? If you have he'll be after my new pet Magnus the mouse. I can still hear Miss Hornblades deafening screech in my ear. Anyway, will I have to start in form 1 again? (I don't want to look like a baby in front of my friends) If I don't, who will be my wizer (a teacher in wizardland) because I don't want a surprise? I hate surprises.

Anyway, thanks for telling me about the tampering spells. I'm actually looking forward to coming back.

Yours Sincerely

Balthasar

The Wizard letter By Rachael Hearns

2008-01-09T03:29:00.001-08:00

Wizards Place

27 November

Dear Jodias,

I am so thrilled to be coming back and I will defenetly win the trophy with use all and I am deilited to be seeing you all again.

I will check out the wizard website and start training after writing this letter. I give you my
promise and I won't attemped the weather spell until I am perfected in my traing.Would you tell the Head Wizard that I am truely sorry for breaking the rules by doing the weather spell when I am not fully perfected. I will stick to learning my flying skills and win the flying compitition.

I really can't wait to be back with my dearest wizard family, and showing of all my wizard tricks you have taught me over the last few days. Missing you all loads, see you in four days!

Yours truely
Balthasar
xx

to jodias by laura

2008-01-09T03:13:00.001-08:00

The North Side of magic land
27th november 07
Dear Jodias
you're a very good friend! this is marvellous news. I am extremly excited to get back and see all my friends like you, Mark, Nicky and Amy.

This is the most fabulous news I've heard in ages. I have been really bored not doing anything.I am also so glad that I could be involved in winning this years trophe. Anyway a while ago my mum was'nt feeling well As well as me not being feeling well my mum has caught the cold again.

Another thing is I have not being studying, besides I wont know what to do when I get my test. Anyhow I will also see you soon need to do my studying.

from laura

VCOP letter to Jodias by melissa

2008-01-09T03:13:00.000-08:00

21 Cozy Cone Corner

13th December 2007

Dear Jodias,

I was delighted when i recevied your letter.I cannot wait to return to the Acdamey.Of course i will look at the website and i will take careful precautions ,i will also not attempt any of the weather tampering spells.

I will apologise to Mr Whitehouse for putting a mouse, cat and a dog in the hall way i thought it would be funny to see them chase each other through the school.Mr Whitehouse (headteacher) was furious. I discoverd he was mad by his facial expressions.

Strangly i never liked school but now i can't wait to go back.I will get to see my friends again.

Your Trusted Friend,

Balthasar

Dear Jodias by Heather Mcfadyen

2008-01-09T03:12:00.000-08:00

Wisard Wane Lane
13 december 2007

Dear Jodias,
You are my trusted friend! This is fandabydosy news to here from you again because I have just had a little baby girl her name is Jullesiy.

Im so glad that im coming back I was lost for words when I hered the news. Me and my girlfriend are staying with my mum just now but wer getting our own place after christmas.My aunt was recently on the phone she siad she is doing fine shes in hospital (unfortunetly) but when we were young we used to call her grumpy granny gray hips, remember, even though she was my aunt. How is Mr Clive? I have been waiting egerly to come back. I promise I won't do any weather tapering spells so dont worry!!!

Another thing is that I have learned to play the Flugel Horn, aswell as being abel to play the Tuba!!! Well thats all see you on the 20th of January 2008

Bye For now,
Balthasar
xxx

I'm nearly back! by Lewis Rm 11

2008-01-09T03:11:00.001-08:00

Dear Jodias

I'm amazed that you sent me a letter after I transformed the bully into a big baboons botty!And I'm looking foward to seeing you all again .

Now don't worry,I won't do any weather tamper spells because I don't like them.I really like it here,we should come during summer vacation.

And tell the bully that I'm very sorry and that I will reverse the spell as soon as I get back.

your forever pal,

Balthasar.

P.S I miss you so much.

p.p.s When can I come back?

VCOP Dear Jodias

2008-01-09T03:11:00.000-08:00

Wizard hat p.l
29th November
2006

Dear Jodias,
I was obliged when I reseved you interesting letter. I am really excited to see you all, I can't wait . Isn't it just marvellous? My Sister will be awfully upset because of me going to Western Academy of Wizardry.

Sadley I haven't been practising for my wizardry. I willl start to learn but! I had a glimpse at the spell book last night and I will see what I can do and what I can't.

I can't wait to see you all agian it is as if I was gone for two years insted of one.

your sincerly,
balthasar.

VCOP LETTER TO JODIAS

2008-01-09T03:10:00.000-08:00

the wand street 27th november06

dear,Jodias

I just wanted to thank you very much for that letter.Whilst I was expelled I played playstation it was great!But I missed you vey much.I hope you have proggresed.However I am back now and I love it

What have you been learning? I have learned something -the spells on Wise Wizard Warning must not be ignored you know I always follow your advice .

I was expelled beacause I told the teacher I don't want to do that work then she told me to get out the her classroom and she told the head master then i got expelled.

I actually want to come back to the academy so we can meet toghther again.I will see you tommorow and we can play toghther like the old days.

you dearest friend ,

Balthasar

Letter to Jodias by Bethany

2008-01-09T03:09:00.001-08:00

Wand Cresent 4210

27th Nov 2006

Dear Jodias,

I am destined to see all my fellow wizards at the Academy. Oh and I was wondering which team we are playing against? However with me we would win.

I have been following your instruction very carefully. I think I might have to be moved up a level because I am a star. Oh and sorry for breaking nearly everything but I have got the money right here so I will give it to you when I get there. Maybe me breaking those fragile things gives you a point to throw them out and buy new things.

I am dieing to get there and get to see all my friend. I willl see you soon!

From,

Balthasar.

VCOP By Emma Mc Letter to Jodias

2008-01-09T03:09:00.000-08:00

Spell Village
28 November 2006

Dear Jodias,

I am as ecstatic as you are. I'm glad that you want me to come back,I have been driving my dad up the wall.

While you have been at the W.A.W.I have been practicing the flying Duck Spell, it didn't go so well.First I made it hit a wall.Second it went far then turned and fell at my feet.What have you been doing?,Any new spells?I had a look at the spell it was a puzzler!Pages 95 &72 instead of a cat ...I got a gigantic BEAR!!!It had a auful smell coming it's half mouth half nose.It had a rotten eye, one foot and no arms. I have got to go because I need a new wand (56t).

I'll be waiting for you when I come back.Until Monday goodbye!!!!

Your amazing friend,

Balthasar

VCOP Letter to Jodias by Logan

2008-01-09T03:07:00.003-08:00

96,262 Potion Place

20th November 2006

Dear Jodias,

I can't wait to arrive back at the door of the gigantic Western Acadamy of Wizardry and I cant wait to deafeat our rivals The Southern School of Sorcerery at the game of quiddich.

Although, I looked on the website and it said something to do with the Southern School's captain being banned for the game of quiddich.Oh and Iv'e been reasearching for the W.A.W.T.P (Western Acadamy of Wizardry Training Programme) and I'm positive I'm going to pass.Last but not least I got the new Whizz 8000 broom,it's hysterical.

Once again I can't wait to see you again.

Your dearest friend,

Balthasar

A Letter To Jodias. By Bili

2008-01-09T03:07:00.002-08:00

Dear Jodias,

19 Magic Land
28th November 2006

what great news ! I just got the letter a few days ago.
I am very sorry about the last time,but it is a honour
to have me back.

How are all my old friends doing?
I promise you I will not do that Weather Tampering
Spell and I have checked up on the Western Academy's
website. I didn't ignore the Wise Wizard Warning.
Who is the best in the class now?

It just remains I can't wait to come back again.
I promise no Weather Tampering spells like the last time.

Your Trusted friend
Balthasar

A letter to Jodias By Hannah

2008-01-09T03:07:00.001-08:00

Spellhill Village

28 November 2006

Dear Jodias,

What a spectacular letter. to be with all my friends I cant wait

we are going to have so much fun.

I will so hard to make up for everything I missed. Spare your magnificant magic for the show we want to be the best.

I shall be extra careful incase I get eaten by the monsters.

I cant wait to be with all my old friends again (Life can be so short).

I am extreamly sorry for tampering with the weather and breaking your wand by falling through the roof I still have that scar on my leg.

I too am over the moon to be working with you again.

Your friend,

Balthasar.

Letter To Jodias By Ben

2008-01-09T03:07:00.000-08:00

21 Broomstick RD
28 November 2006

Dear Jodias,
I have recieved your letter and I too am looking forward to coming back.I hope when I come back we will the trophy and be champions. I accept my punishment and I will start training on Monday. As you asked I will behave and not do bad spells and hope to see you when I return.

I accept your rules and will follow them carefully.I am sorry for my behaviour before and I have changed my ways.I hope you and everyone else are fine.I am glad to hear about work progessing and hope to work when I return.

I also heard the competion is hard so I hope to be fit and healthy ready to play.Are the teams still the same as last time? Please when I come back will you keep me updated with all the competion facts

See you soon

Your trusted friend,
Balthasar

VCOP - My Letter To Jodias - By Ellie x

2008-01-09T03:06:00.000-08:00

13 Magic Lane

29th November

2006

Dear Jodias,

I am delighted to be returning to the academy. I promise, when I start back, I will not do anything silly or stupid. Most of all, I will behave myself. Unlike last term!

So this competition ... what's it like then? Not to tough I hope! I hope it is like last years, that was super fun, but a little bit tricky! I have been on the website. It is looking fabulous! But there is sometimes a little virus when I am looking at the pictures .... any idea ?!

I am returning next Monday so only about 3 days! Any new people came while I was off ?

I hope there is, I love getting to know new people! It is so much fun!

It was great to hear from you. I hope to see you soon. Probubly on Monday when I come!

Your good friend,

Balthasar

By Ellie x

Mrs Vaghn by Kieran

2007-10-11T02:08:00.001-07:00

Mrs Vaughn is a short stumpy woman who is very horrid. She lives with her foster child Emmeline. Mrs Vaughn has gray hair and she wears an old apron.She is also very jealous of how smart Emmeline is.

MRS VAUGHAN

2007-10-10T04:09:00.000-07:00

There once was a lady called mrs vaughan she was a stockey woman with tatad hair,creaky voice and a personality of a very old teacher. She was a smoker she had a cigarete dangling from her mouth every time you saw her when it fell of another one grew and she hates kids. Her face is ugly it's riwnkle, long nose, unwashed make up and teeth like tombstones with an extremely bony body. Her clothes are old and stinky she is very very mownie so I would leave her alone.

Ross Glass p6 rm 11

Mrs Vaghan

2007-10-10T04:01:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaghan is an old,stocky ,short and an uneducated woman.She had a cracked voice no one would want to listen to.Mrs Vaughan is a unkind woman who always has a cigarette in her mouth.When her cigarette is done another gets put inher mouth.Mrs Vaghan wore an apron sometimes and looked furois.She was a crooked,wrinkely and thoughtless person.
by melissa

Mrs Voughan By Emma M

2007-10-10T03:56:00.003-07:00

Mrs Voughan was a very mean,moany and thoughtless woman she never thought that anyone was important but her.Her hiar was clamped back by a grip her hair was partly brown and the rest was grey. She has short hair, a cigarette dangling from her mouth.She is stricked and looks frightning . I for one would't want her to look after me.She is uneducted and selfish. She has a stocky build.

Mrs Voughan

2007-10-10T03:56:00.002-07:00

Mrs Vaughan By Kerry

2007-10-10T03:56:00.001-07:00

Her Face looks really evil and mean. It really does look like she hates Emmaline!!!
She has lots of spot and it is really wrinkly!!
Her Hair has strips of grey.It looks like she never she washes is.It wa short,stright and cliped back.Her vocie sound deep and nasty.It sound like she was really angry!!
She is really thin. It is like she never eats or she does but not a lot.I think she works in a lundrette because she always wear a ipron.

Emmeline by Sarah

2007-10-10T03:56:00.000-07:00

Emmeline is a thin, quiet girl who is very shy. She is small for her age,has pale cheeks and dark hair. She likes to read and is very kind unlike her mean foster mother Mrs Vaughan who always makes her go outside and never lets her read. Thats Emmeline.

Mrs Vaughan

2007-10-10T03:55:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaughan is an unfriendly stocky old woman whois grumpy and has no respect for her foster child Emmeline.She has parted hair on one side and clamped back with a grip.she also has a deep voice and nearly always has a cigarette in her mouth. Emmeline is to scared to say she is being abbused I hope she gets moved soon. by andrew

Mrs Vaughan by Logan

2007-10-10T03:54:00.001-07:00

Mrs Vaughan was an elderly, strict woman.She was unkind, mean aand frightening to Emmeline.Mrs Vaughan had grey hair clamped back by a grip.She was small and was always lying to people. Mrs Vaughan was a heavy smoker, you never seen her without a cigarette in her mouth.Although she was very mean she was very tidy and always had Emmeline outside and out of her way.Mrs Vaughan was a stocky woman and was always very angry at Emmeline.

Mrs Vaughan by Ben

2007-10-10T03:54:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaughan is a stocky,grey haired,uneducated woman who wears a ragged old apron.She always has a cigarette hanging out of her mouth.She never reads books so that is why she is so uneducated.She is always shouting at a little girl called Emmeline and is horrible and mean to her.Her clothes are dirty and ragged because she is far to lazy to clean them.

Mrs Vaughan

2007-10-10T03:53:00.001-07:00

There once was a lady called Mrs Vaughan she was a old stockey woman, with tated hair,creaky voice and a personality of a old teacher. She was a smoker she had a cigarete dangleing from her mouth ever time you saw her, when it fell of an other one grew and she hates kids.

Emmeline by Becky

2007-10-10T03:53:00.000-07:00

Emmeline is a very small, thin girl. She is well educated girl who loves books, but she is being treated badley by Mrs Vaughan who dosn't let her read books, she alwayshas to go out to play. Emmeline wears a black t-shirt and a blue frock over it, the blue has a white,frilly coller round her neck. She has long brown hair. She is very small for her age. She is very scared of Mrs Vaughan because sometime she gives her a good tan. (an old fashion word for smack)
by Becky

Mrs Vaughan By Bili

2007-10-10T03:52:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaughan was a stocky women. She had short,thick,straight and grey hair. She wore her hair up clamped back in a grip. She was careless and didn't care much about the girl. Mrs Vaughan wants Emmeline out of her way. Mrs Vaughan had a cigarette aways dangled from the corner of her mouth.

By Bili

Mrs Vaughan

2007-10-10T03:48:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaughan is a stocky unkind selfish lady.
She has grey hair and she is old and uneducated.
Her habits are smoking and she likes being horrible.
She is very dirty and unkind.
She is misrable and looks as if she hasn't had a bath in months.

By Mark

Mrs Vaughan by Chloe A

2007-10-10T03:43:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaughan is a stoky, old, grey haired, mean, horrible woman.
I think she is a nasty foster mum to Emmeline.
Mr Vaughan sounds uneducated, grumpy and lazy person.
I think she has a smoking habbit but also has a habbit for shouting at Emmeline. Mrs Vaughan sounds like she has a miserable sad life .
She does not allow Emmeline to read books.
Mrs Vaughan would rather have Emmeline out playing all day long so she can have a sad, lonley day to herself!

Mrs Voughan By Rachael H

2007-10-10T03:42:00.001-07:00

Mrs Voughan was a cruel and monay woman. She had thick grey hair claimped back by grip.
She was uneduicated,ugly and always wore an aprin.Mrs Voughan was strict,stocky and always had a temper.The most disgusting thing about mrs Voughan is everday you see her,she's got a cigerete hanging from her mouth.Everytime one dissepears another one quikly apears.She's furius when Emmeline reads books.I think she's jelouis because she's uneduicated

2007-10-10T03:34:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaughan is a short stocky woman.With a wicked look in her face,she always has a cigarete in her mouth.She has short gray hair wich is clamped back.Mrs Vaughen is an un-educated woman who is jelous of how smart Emmeline is.She has a deep voice with a taned face, she wears an apron with a dress underneath.She is very stricked and will march up and down till she finds you!
Mrs Vaughen by Alex

Mrs Voughan by Laura

2007-10-10T03:31:00.001-07:00

Mrs Voughan is a horrible nasty woman.
She is very stricked and acts mean to other people.
she is a cruel old woman.
She is also very discusting. She is so untidy and very grumpy.
She smokes and her cigarette dangles from her mouth.

2007-10-10T03:31:00.000-07:00

Emmeline

Emmeline is sad and feels trapped outdoors.If Emmeline was me i would run away because having to miss out on so much must be hard.She must feel hurt and unloved maybe she has not been fed propbley and that is why she is so thin.Worried and scared are the two things she would feel the most but she is a bit mopey too.It must hard to live like Emmeline all upset and unapeseated.She must have a lot of presser on herself.
By Bethany

2007-10-10T03:30:00.002-07:00

Mrs Vaughan by Maliha
Mrs Vaughan is very strict and grumpy.She has short grey hair so she may be old.She seems un-educated,un-kind and un-pleasant.She also seems hard to please.By her looks,MrsVaughan looks mean and stocky.She also seems very skinny but rough.

Emmeline By Jennifer

2007-10-10T03:30:00.001-07:00

Emmeline is a very sweet little girl she is quit small and thin for her age.
She likes to go out and play and if she is not allowed to play, she reads books.
She has got long brown wavy hair, she has pale cheeks and does not like getting spit on her face.
Emmeline is very shy and anxios, she wants to be educated but she can't because of mrs Vaughan.
Emmeline isn't very happy because she want's a nice mum, and she has a vvery qiuet voice, she gets very scared incase she gets abused.
Mrs vaughan just looks after Emmeline she is not her mum, Emmeline doesn't wan't to tell anyone incase they talk to Mrs Vaughan and then Mrs Vaughan might abuse her but she really wan'ts a new mum.

2007-10-10T03:30:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaughan byMax
There once was an old lady called Mrs Vaughan.She was very fat but one day in the garden she hut a needle and she blew down to a bony person.As the weeks went on her hair went grey and she became a smoker.Then she became stocky,clamped and thick it was if she was uncared about.

Emmeline By Hannah

2007-10-10T03:28:00.002-07:00

Emmeline is a small, thin dark haired girl who loves to read.

She wants to be well educated but her foster mother wont let her.

Her cheeks are pale and she is shy.

She wishes she had a nice mother because she is not very happy.

She is miserable because she has to stay outside most of the time.

She is mopey and wants to have her head in a book.

Emmeline is sweet but nobody notices.

Mrs Vaughn by Lewis (RM12)

2007-10-10T03:28:00.001-07:00

Mrs Vaughan was a strict, thick, plump and filthy old woman, she was 55 years old she looked older because she smoked 24-7 .She was also a foster mum to a girl called Emmeline Em for short.She smoked so much that every-time one cigarette was done another one appeared!

by lewis (rm12)

Mrs Vaughan by Heather Mcf

2007-10-10T03:28:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaughan was a stocky, gray haired, middle aged old woman who was very un-educated.A cigarette always dangled from her mouth and when one fell another one grew! Mrs Vaughan wore an aprin and was ugly also she was terribly strict, she was cruwl and had a unecasery temper. She looked a bit like a teacher or a londret lady. I bet if you met her you would be skared of her but if you lived with her eww!!!

Mrs Vaugham By Emma H

2007-10-10T03:24:00.001-07:00

Mrs Vaugham is an evil, selfish, horrid foster parent. She has short, thick, straight , grey hair clamped back with a grip. A cigarette dangles out the corner of her mouth(which doesn't make her look any nicer). Everyday around her stocky body she wears a grubby apron. She is uneducated and doesn't know how to read.

My Description Of Mrs Vaughan By Ellie

2007-10-10T03:24:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaughan is a plump lady, she doesn't really care for Emmeline, the little girl who she looks after. Her hair is long, straight and grey. It is always pinned back with a hair grip. She wears a tight and ugly apron. The girl Emmeline, Mrs Vaughan always wants her out the way, so she sends her out to play. There is always a cigarette hanging at the corner out of her mouth, and when it is finished, another one appears!!
By Ellie

Mrs Vaughan By Caitlin

2007-10-10T03:21:00.000-07:00

Mrs Vaughan is a stocky women! She has a mean looking face.She is also cruel and moany.She has straight, thick, grey hair which is clam back by a grip! Everywhere place she goes she has a cigarette hanging from her mouth! (ergh) She is uneducated so she does not want Emmeline to read books. She calls Emmeline a mopey child. Mrs Vaughan always wears a apron.

Spaghetti Bolognese

2007-09-20T06:27:00.000-07:00

Spaghetti Bolognese, Bolognese
Spaghetti Bolognese, Bolognese
And cheese and garlic and peppers too
Spaghetti Bolognese, Bolognese

listen to my post

Brussel Sprouts by Sarah

2007-08-24T03:14:00.000-07:00

They are green and mushy.
And make me feel sick,
They are the veg,
I would never pick.

When they are sitting on my plate,
I throw them and turn up my nose,
They are green and mushy I shout out loud,
They make me feel sick I'm not eating those.

Listen to my poem

test

2007-06-12T03:17:00.000-07:00

This is test blog for the visitors

The Iron Woman By Bethany

2007-05-15T02:16:00.000-07:00

15/5/07 WALT- write a detailed description.

Then SPLASH! from the river, rising before Lucy 's feet appeared, The Iron Woman. She had a big ,square ,metal body just like her head and two long, cold arms with 5 chip shaped fingers at the end of them. Two long, damp legs with banging metal feet at the end. Lucy felt small compared to the Iron Woman. People at school all said there was something in that lake.

By Bethany.

The Secret Unicorn by Laura

2007-03-05T03:28:00.000-08:00

Book tittle: The Secret Unicorn

Author: Linda Chapan.

Illustractor: Biz Hull

I would recommend this book because there very interesting pictures.

It was cool when Lauren said the words into the unicorns ear.

It was great when Jessica heard that her dad was getting remarried.

The part I like best is: When the unicorn started to fly!

Book Review by Andrew

2007-03-05T03:26:00.000-08:00

Book Title :The Rotten Romans

Authour:Terry Deary

Illustratior:Martin Brown

I would recommend this book because:

It's great for learning about Romans

Very intresting in a funny way

it's got good roman myths

The part I liked best:When emperor Caligula made his horse his second hand man(so he was nearly as powerfull as the emperor.)

To whom would you recomend this book:Someone who is learning about Romans.

My Book Reveiw by Logan

2007-03-05T03:18:00.000-08:00

Book title:The Ruthless Romans

Author:Terry Deary

Illistrator:Martin Brown

I would recommend this book because

It is very funny
The drawings are great
You can learn alot about the Romans and how ruthless they were.

The part I liked best was when a Roman was trying to trick a goat into coming to him so he could kill it by using a carrot and the goat thinks tough call death or a carrot in a sarcastic look.

I would recommend this book to anyone who is interested in the Romans or doing a Romans topic.

My Book Review by Ben

2007-03-05T03:15:00.002-08:00

Book Title-The Vicious Vikings

Author-Terry Deary

Illustrator-Martin Brown

I WOULD RECOMMEND THIS BOOK BECAUSE:

IT'S FUNNY.
IT'S INTERESTING AND TELLS YOU LOTS OF FACTS ON THE VIKINGS.
IT HAS FUNNY LITTLE CHARACTER STRIPS.

I WOULD RECOMMEND THIS BOOK TO:

PEOPLE WHO ARE INTERESTED IN HISTORY AND VIKINGS.

THE PART I LIKED BEST WAS:THE VIKINGS POEMS BECAUSE THEY ARE FUNNY , INTERESTING AND UNUSAL BECAUSE THE GUY IS TELLING A POEM ON FACTS AND HE'S ABOUT TO WALK OFF A WALL.

Book Review by Emma

2007-03-05T03:15:00.001-08:00

Book Title - Charlotte's Web
Author - E.B White

I would recommend this book because
-It is emotional in different ways.
-It is a caring and loving story.
-It is good for girls between the age of 7 and 10.

My favourite part was when Templeton the rat goes to the dump and gets chased by two hungary crows.

I would recommend this book to girls primary 4,5 and 6.

My Book Reveiw by Chloe

2007-03-05T03:15:00.000-08:00

Book Tittle: Girls Under Pressure.

Author: Jacqueline Wilson.

Illustrator: Nick Sharratt.

I would reccomend this book because:
* It is like a diary and a guide to girls age 9 and up.
* It has amazing pictures.
* It is very intersting.

I like the end part when a new art teacher came to teach art lessons, and had to have an asstiant helper to guide him around the school!!

I would reccomend this book to girls who like a funny story.

My Book Review By Sarah

2007-03-05T03:14:00.000-08:00

Book Title: Junie B Jones and her big fat mouth.

Author: Barbara Park.
Illustrator: Denise Brukus.

I would recommend this book because:
Junie B is a very very funny little girl.
She always gets muddled up and says words wrong.
The pictures are great.

The part I liked best was when Junie B ate a fruit pastille off the ground and had to spit it out again.

To whom would you recommend this book to:
I would recommend this book to girls in primary school with a good sense of humour.

SCARDEY CAT by Hannah

2007-02-19T03:26:00.001-08:00

I have a cat,
A very scardey cat.
It runs to hide,
He’s got no pride.
At night he sneaks out into a tree,
I run and hide incase something is following me.
His fur is white and as fluffy as a cloud,
That ginger Tom is always proud.

Sumo Wrestlers by Alexander

2007-02-19T03:26:00.000-08:00

SUMO WRESTLERS JUMP OUT AT HALLOWEEN DISCO
At Woodhill Halloween Disco 2 teachers jumped out as sumos.
Miss Mitchell and Mr Lunan jumped out at Woodhill Disco as Sumos
and none of the pupils knew about it. Our reporter asked the winner Mark Christie “where did you get that fabulous costume?” “It was a homemade costume,” Mark cheerfully replied and our other reporter spoke to the other winner Rachel Currie why did you dress half dead “it was the only costume I had” said Rachel. This all took place at Woodhill Primary.

My Sympathetic Character by Mark Chirstie

2007-02-19T03:24:00.000-08:00

MY SYMPATHETIC CHARACTER

My sympathetic character is a little elf called Enjey Benjy .He owns a cottage in the country . He also has a helpful dog called Fred. They go around helping people with their problems.

Cat's, Cat's Everywhere by Bili and Emma

2007-02-19T03:23:00.001-08:00

Cats are playful, Cats are slow.
Cats, cats everywhere.
Cats can be fat but, some can be thin.
As long as whiskers.

As fat as a cat.
Cats, cats everywhere
Cats, cats everywhere.
Long tail’s like string, Short tail’s like a bottle.
Some cats bite but, some cats don’t.